The weather has finally turned chilly here in North Texas. But it wasn’t that many weeks (days?) ago that the temps were still quite toasty. Here’s a little story I wrote about one of those days.
All Safe Inside
The air around us is suffocatingly hot, close, and still. A weak light wobbles in my hand. Smells of doggie breath, spit, and sweat assail my nose. Three of my four charges take turns panting and barking. The fourth snarls and tries to rip apart the small dog bed on the floor. Beyond our confined space, all noises are muffled and faint. I feel my heart beating in my sore teeth. And then a text lands on my phone.
EARLIER THAT DAY…
“Go potty!” I said, opening the door to let my four fur grandbabies into the backyard. Hazel, the senior boxer, immediately lay down in a patch of sun. Rubble, Remi, and Reign‒the three miniature pinschers‒sprinted away to the far corners of the fenced area.
After watering thirsty plants, I sat on a lawn chair, thankful for the beautiful day. The sky was deep blue, with a few cottony white tufts. A gentle breeze cooled my skin. I heard a lawnmower next door, and soon, the smell of newly mown grass wafted over the fence. One of the min pins zoomed past. Dog sitting for that pack kept me on my toes and made the week fly by.
“Go potty,” I reminded the dogs, noting they were more interested in napping or chasing toads, butterflies, and bunnies. Unexpectedly, I heard faint chirps and looked above at the improbably small barn swallow nest. The mud structure was secured under a corner of the back porch overhang. An adult bird swooped in for feeding time. Popping above the edge of the nest were three tiny bird heads, their beaks opened and waiting. Quite a show.
With closed eyes, I listened to the relaxing sounds of the pool’s fountain. I hadn’t brought my suit but considered coming back out later to cool my feet in the water while I read. My smile soon turned into a frown when I felt a slight twinge in my teeth. A recent visit to the dentist had provided no resolution, except for another appointment scheduled for several weeks later.
Just then, I got a call from my vacationing daughter. She asked about the doggies and mentioned seeing that severe weather was expected in the area that night. I know Texas storms can be extreme. I reassured her that I wasn’t worried and would remain weather-aware. I urged the dogs back indoors, promising treats for those who obeyed. Rubble was often the holdout, spending extra time moseying around the perimeter of the yard for anything he missed on his initial patrol of the area.
The rest of the day got away from me, between the dogs and the editing work that always accompanied me on the laptop. Before I knew it, the clock said it was past time for the dogs’ dinner, followed by their last potty break. When I opened the door, I realized the weather had turned. The temperature had dropped, and a strong wind blew. In the sky, angry dark clouds raced across the face of the moon. The baby birds were quiet for the night, and I was happy for the protection they had within their nest. I encouraged the puppy potty party of four to go out and do their business quickly.
“Inside!” I told the dogs as soon as they’d gone potty, promising them treats if they quickly followed my command.
Back in the house, I remembered the blue betta swimming lazily in its fishbowl and sprinkled a few food pellets into the water. I closed the blinds and got ready for bed. Rain spattered the windows. Before long, Hazel lounged on her large dog bed, and the three min pins were up on the bed with me and my book. Suddenly, the shrill blare of weather warning sirens sounded!
Like in my nearby town, that alert meant a tornado or large hail with high, destructive winds. I would take no chances and felt a strong responsibility for my daughter’s dogs. Grabbing my phone, flashlight, and a handful of dog treats, “Come! Treat!” I announced. We headed for the storm shelter, solidly set in the hot garage. Of course, Rubble, being Rubble, needed to make several passes inside the garage before he joined the others in the small shelter. I turned on the flashlight, closed the door, and sat on a low stool. That’s when all heck broke loose. No, not weatherwise. In fact, I could barely hear the wind and the faint pelting of hail. The problem was with the dogs!
As the confused canines tried to make sense of their surroundings, I already wondered how long we’d need to stay in that sweaty torture chamber. Remi and Reign nipped at each other, trying to run around in the small space. Hazel barked loudly, sending her odiferous breath directly into my face. And a snarling Rubble took over the small pet bed on the floor‒not to lie down but to try and rip it apart with his teeth. Time stood still.
RIGHT NOW…
My phone buzzes with a timely text from my daughter. “Just checked the radar for your area! Are you okay?” I assure her we are ALL safe in the storm shelter (except the fish…oops!). “There’s a fan in there,” she adds.
I shine my flashlight into the dark corners, and there it is, right next to me. My savior. I turn on the fan and pick up Rubble. He sits on my lap, whiskers facing into the surprisingly cool breeze. Rubble is suddenly quiet and content. The other three follow his lead, lie down, and go silent. I check my phone for a weather update. My toothache recedes from a steady throb to an occasional twinge.
Tomorrow, the sun will return, and I will start my second day of dog sitting. I can do this!

Big dog lover here. Really liked this piece. Thank you!
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I know you love dogs, Jan. Happy you enjoyed this!
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Lots of details and suspense in this brief tale.
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I appreciate your generous feedback on my story, Pat!
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My pleasure.
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Having been in your shoes, I loved the tension in this story. It seems all hell breaks loose when grand dog sitting. Well done Becky.
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You’re so right, John. Thank you for reading!
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There must be a dog sitting god out there who needs appeasement.
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Probably so:)
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A very absorbing story, Becky. A reader definitely feels for the human and the four doggies. (As well as the fish.) And I give that fan five stars. 🙂
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Yes, it was certainly a memorable experience, Dave! Thanks so much for reading and for your positive comments.
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I like this a lot! Well done!
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Thanks, Paul!
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Two challenges in one day made a good story! Doggy photo helped me visualize the action. Thank goodness for the fan!
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It was quite an experience, Audrey, and funny when I look back at it:) Thanks for reading!
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Whew! Crisis narrowly averted! Let’s hope the second day of dog-sitting is calmer.
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Thanks, Liz! Yes, things did calm down for the rest of that stay. Later in the summer, there was a baby bird emergency with another batch of birds. But that is, as they say, another story:)
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You’re welcome, Becky!
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You brought me right into your experience, Becky. So many vivid details…I could smell Hazel’s breath and hear the stinging rain. Hooray for that fan and the ensuing calm! Thank you for sharing this.
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And thank YOU for reading and sharing feedback, Tracy!
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What a cute bunch! Glad you’re all safe. Enjoyed reading this!
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So pleased you read and liked it, Mel!
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Wow! And that was only day 1? There’s always one in the crowd like Rubble who marches to his own time.
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Yes, the first day:) Rubble is DEFINITELY the one who marches to his own tune! Thanks for reading, Pete.
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I opened this yesterday but didn’t get a chance to read it. Glad I saved it for first thing this morning. I loved all the details. I’ve lived in tornado country many times. Scary enough but with 4 dogs in a small space the pressure build up would be intense. I felt that tension here. You sucked me right in there with you.
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I’m pleased to read that you felt the tension in the story, Marlene. I appreciate you for the feedback!
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A well-written tale. With a happy-ish ending, happily.
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So glad you read and enjoyed:)
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Oh, Becky, a lot of dogs to take care of and a great story.
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They certain keep a person busy. Thanks so much, Gigi! I appreciate that.
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Great story and not ONLY because it has dogs in it!
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The dogs do help, of course:) Hope you’re feeling okay this evening, Martha. Caution is the word!
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All of them are adorable.
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And each sweet in their own way:)
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Your story beautifully captures the chaos and charm of caring for four distinct personalities under one roof.
I could almost feel the Texas heat, the storm, and the lively antics of Rubble, Remi, Reign, and Hazel!
Moments like these remind us that love, patience, and a few treats can turn even a stormy night into a warm memory.
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Thank you for the positive feedback on my piece!
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Wow! I can’t imagine hearing that weather warning siren suddenly blaring. Very scary, especially for the dogs. I hope your tooth is better.
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Yes, all is well:) Thanks, Jennie!
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Whew! You’re welcome.
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Oh my. That would be a bit scary. Glad you found the fan. I was feeling claustrophobic reading about the shelter.
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It was quite a relief for sure, Darlene. Thanks for reading!
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Gosh that sounds scary!! Great post- I was very tense reading it! And your granddoggies look so cute in their jumpers!
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I appreciate your kind words:)
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There is havoc when dog visitors come to stay, don’t think I could cope with storm threats as well. I didn’t know having a storm shelter was a thing, but makes sense.
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Thanks for reading, Janet! We have lots of tornado threats in Texas, so some people do have storm shelters.
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Sabemos que os aninais são um bom parceiro em nossas vidas conjugal, eles trazem muita alegrias para cada um de nos seres normais…..
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Yes, animals do bring a lot of joy even though things can get quite hectic sometimes!
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I lived in a place that thankfully has never been in such weather, and I couldn’t imagine how scary it must’ve been! Though it’s relieving to see that everyone is safe. Goodluck on the second day 🙂
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The rest of the time was very calm compared to that:)
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I enjoyed reading how the events unfolded on this day. I had to be challenging to be in a small storm shelter with four dogs. Glad all were safe.
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It certainly put all my patience into play, Sheryl. Thanks so much for reading!
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For anyone who has/had multiple dogs, this is a true story, and with a weather alert, a scary one, too. Nicely written!!
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Yes, it was scary. Thanks so much for reading, Jeanne!
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Thank you for sharing. I am glad it all worked out.
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I was certainly relieved when it was all over!
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I’d love to see more ‘day in the life’ pieces like this; they make ordinary days feel quietly dramatic.
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Happy you enjoyed it!
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Here in Montreal, its freezing cold haha!
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I believe it!
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the temp is always up and down in Florida too. It’s been chilly last couple of days.
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It can change so quickly, too!
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