For many children, some versions of popular fairy tales can be frightening! An evil witch who bakes children in her oven? Not a great story to lead into bedtime. In fact, folktales collected by the Brothers Grimm were often ghastly and not even meant for kids! And even some of the stories written by Hans Christian Andersen contained very dark and tragic themes.
When I was recently tasked with retelling a collection of fairy tales in rhyme, I knew right away that I wanted my versions to be positive, fun, and uplifting. Jack‘s giant doesn’t have to die, Pinocchio can use his nose to save Geppetto, and Goldi would decide to leave the Bears’ home safely of her own volition. Red‘s grandmother remains safe, of course, while the girl ponders how the wolf might react if her hood were sewn in different colors.
All in all, this was such a fun and challenging project. I hope you’ll take a peek at my 4 rhyming stories published right here at Empowered Parents!
I love these, as I teach 3s-young 5’s and fairy tales are always a challenge – thanks
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I’m glad you’ve discovered Empowered Parents, Beth, and I often write articles and stories for the owner, Tanja. Thanks for visiting! Becky
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Thanks for this, Becky
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You’re welcome!
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So clever! Loved the Pinocchio one 😉
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Thanks, Christy; it was great fun!
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Fun! I really enjoyed the Pinocchio update.
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I appreciate that, Sarah!
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These are wonderful, Becky! Thanks so much for sharing…
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Happy you like them, Bette!
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You are so clever with your re-telling. I hope they get the audience that they deserve. 🙂
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Pat, that’s so kind of you to say so!
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Very well done, Becky. I enjoyed them all.
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John, I’m so glad you liked them. Thanks for reading!
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I certainly enjoyed your stories, even though I still have some affection for the originals. They were one way my friends and I learned to deal with fears — not to mention learning how to create a bit of fear in our tent mates when told our own made-up stories at camp!
Beyond that, those old fairy tales were our first hint of a world where everything wasn’t sweet and nice. Even better, they gave us a way to talk about analogous experiences in our own life. In 10th grade biology class, some of us dealt with a particularly cold and distant teacher by imagining her as a witch who spent her time burning up students with her bunsen burner! Of course she didn’t, and we knew she didn’t, but that childhood story about the cookie-baking witch lingered, and helped us cope.
Of course, most parents will know their own child and choose accordingly. Even better, they’ll read whichever stories they choose with their children. Giving a child a book is good, but sharing a book with a child is better!
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You make VERY good points here, Linda! I love your story about the biology teacher and the bunsen burner:)
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When I was seven I was confined to bed after an accident on my bike. Next door neighbour lent me her old copy ( black and white drawings, old fashioned cover ) of Grimm’s Fairy Tales and I read all of them. Well done with the positive poems.
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Thanks, Janet! Did you find them unsettling as a child, or were you okay with them? You must have been a strong reader already at seven:)
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Yes looking back I must have been a good reader. They don’t seem to have affected me, I was more scared of the bad fairy in Walt Disney’s cartoon Sleeping Beauty!
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Ha, ha! I know what you mean!
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Congratulations!! Your versions are wonderful!!
The old Grimm tales didn’t bother me at all as a kid. I lived with my grandmother but had “visits to hell” as I called the monthly weekend staying with my biological mother and father who were extremely religous- the hell fire damnation kinds of Southern Baptists. So the threatening bible stories and morality tales from that church were far far more scary to me than the Grimm fairy tales.
Nowadays I prefer more gentle tales and try to tell them myself. So I applaud you wholeheartedly!! Bravo!!
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Thanks! I’m so pleased that you like them, Sue! Yes, the stories you write and paint are definitely gentle and lovely. That’s an interesting and thought-provoking comparison you make to stories even scarier than Grimms from childhood. Yikes!
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Thank you so much!! 🥰
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They are lovely, Becky:)). I particularly enjoyed your version of Little Red Riding Hood. And yes… someone presented me with an illustration version of Grimm’s Fairy Tales as a small child which gave me nightmares for years.
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Oh, I’m so happy that you liked my poems, Sarah! I especially enjoyed writing about Red and her hood:) Yes, I can see how those illustrations could have felt troubling for you as a young, impressionable child.
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And the stories… those really, really dark stories!!!
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Yes, some of them are just that!
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I think your take is wonderful! We are in the year 2021!
However, in the times these stories were written, life was not so great. It was harsh.
“Ring around the rosie
Pocket full of posie
Husha husha
We all fall down”
I played that as a kid. Never knew what it meant.
Now I do. It was written during the Black Plague. Fall down meant to die.
I like that you are updating meaning for today’s reality.
Still, let us not lose historic content.
I think one of the reasons Covid has gotten so far as it has, is because of lessons from the past that we have not learned, or have conveniently forgotten.
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I appreciate that, Resa! Yes, I never knew what “Ring around the Rosie” meant when I was a child, either. I agree that we certainly shouldn’t ignore history and that we DO need to learn from it! As adults, we can decide when the children in our care are ready for some of those more difficult truths. Of course, we have some adults these days who aren’t facing the truth very well…
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Becky, I’m so impressed with your rhyming prowess. That assignment was tough and yet you made it look so easy. I enjoyed all, but especially loved Goldi.
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Wow, I really appreciate that, Tracy! You’re so right that it’s not easy but carries a very strong sense of accomplishment. My editing work in children’s literature these past 18 months has helped to strengthen my skills. It’s not the rhyme that’s so tricky but the meter/beat! Quite the challenge. I wrote Goldi first and gained the confidence to work on the others:) Thanks, again!
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Yes, to the meter and beat! I know that’s the hardest piece of an already (in my mind) difficult task. But you prevailed and created amazing work. (It makes me happy knowing I connected most with your first effort. Hooray for Goldi and Becky!)
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Thanks for your support, Tracy!
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Wow. Congratulations!
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Thank you, Martha!
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Oh these are really delightful, Becky! It would be fun to read all the versions to children as they mature and get their opinions too! 🙂
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Exactly, Mary Jo! The audience for mine is preschoolers, who would require something much different from older children. So happy you liked these. Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
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Ahhhhh I am looking at my copy of Grimms Fairy Tales as I type, Becky…I loved them as a child although I guess I was suitable scared in places but knew it was a tale…In turn, I read them to my children and embellished them with my actions..haha as I do little Lils…none of whom showed any fear or anxiety…by the same token, I understand some children may and do love your versions…Well written, Becky 🙂 x
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You’re so right, Carol, that each child is different in this respect! Great to have all different sorts of versions available for them:) Thanks so much for your kind words!
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I agree with your take on the Brothers Grimm—way too scary and inappropriate for kids. The pictures that went along with some of those stories are still embedded in my mind. Congratulations on softening them up a bit.
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Happy you like them, Pete! I could picture reading them to a preschool or kindergarten class. Thanks!
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I enjoyed your retelling of these classic children’s stories–although, I have to tell you that when I was a wee one, I insisted on the original Grimms’ Fairy Tales, with all of the gory details included.
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I’m very pleased that you liked them, Liz! Yes, opinions on the early versions are mixed, and some really liked them as kids:) I remember feeling more uncomfortable than scared, such as wondering, “Okay, will someone be eaten by the wolf in this story or just shut in the closet?” Thanks so much for reading!
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You’re welcome, Becky! Your comment reminds me that I read the story of Lambikin as an adult , and I was shocked and horrified!
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I had forgotten about that story, Liz! I’m guessing that one has alternate endings?
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these poems are terrific fun: I can tell you relished writing them: buoyant and uplifting; my favourite is the little red riding hood one 🙂
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Yes, it was fun and VERY challenging to write them. Thanks so much, John! I was really happy when I settled on that twist in Red about the color connections:)
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brilliant !!
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Thanks!
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Wow! Your stories and rhymes are amazing! I love the kind spin on Pinocchio and–who knew that one small change could make such a huge difference in the Little Red Riding Hood story? Very cool!
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Cecelia, you’ve made my Sunday! Thanks so much for reading and commenting on my fairy tale poems:)
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Such fun rhymes, Becky. I love the happy endings, especially the Red Riding Hood tea party with Granny and Mr. Wolf. 😀
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I appreciate that, Sylvia! Thanks for reading:)
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I think stories for children have changed a lot over the years – much more than those written for adults.
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You’re probably right, Patsy!
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A wonderful alternative to scaring young children and a great way into teaching them rhyme as well.
Hugs
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Thank you, David. I appreciate this!
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Nice job, Becky! I very much liked Pinocchio the best. (not that you were asking, but it’s the most heartwarming to me.). 🙂
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Thanks so much for saying so, Jeanne!
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Becky, these are soooo cute!!! I loved the ending you gave to Jack and the Beanstalk!
I actually just started reading a bilingual (English/Ukrainian) book of fairy tales for kids, and they remind me of your tales (although I think yours are more positive and upbeat – I read Hansel and Gretel the other night, and the witch still died).
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Sounds like an interesting books of tales! I appreciate your kind comments. Rhyming stories are quite the challenge to get the rhythm/meter just right:)
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Times have changed.
Those tales were written in times of plagues, wars and human abuses (more than we endure today).
Life was grim(m).
I think they were lessons taught.
It’s good to have modern updates.
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Thanks for taking a look, Resa! Yes, they were certainly written in a much different time.
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Lol! I had a fun time reading this.
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Happy you liked this, Kally!
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Smashing rhymes – almost makes me wish I’d had kids (and grand children) to read them to!
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Why, thank you very much! Writing rhyme is certainly a challenge but fun. Happy you liked them.
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Well done, Becky! I like your version much better. Never understood why anyone would read those fairy tales to children. I love the happier version.
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Marlene! Happy you liked them:)
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